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collections/tech/primitives/network/mycelium.md

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 # Mycelium: Our Planetary Network
 
+The planetary network called Mycelium is an overlay network which lives on top of the existing Internet or other peer-to-peer networks created. 
+
 ![](img/planet_net_.jpg)
 
-
-The planetary network called Mycelium is an overlay network which lives on top of the existing Internet or other peer-to-peer networks created. In this network, everyone is connected to everyone. End-to-end encryption between users of an app and the app runs behind the network wall.
+In the Mycelium network, everyone is connected to everyone. End-to-end encryption between users of an app and the app runs behind the network wall.
 
 Each user end network point is strongly authenticated and uniquely identified, independent of the network carrier used. There is no need for a centralized firewall or VPN solutions, as there is a circle-based networking security in place.
 

collections/tech/qsss/nft_storage.md

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 # Quantum Safe Storage System for NFT
 
+Our technology enables quantum safe storage for NFT.
+
 ![](img/nft_architecture_updated.png)
 
 The owner of the NFT can upload the data using one of our supported interfaces:

collections/tech/qsss/qss_filesystem.md

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 # Quantum Safe Filesystem
 
+Our quantum safe filesystem technology has unique features.
+
 ![](qss_fs_arch.png)
 
 A redundant filesystem, can store PB's (millions of gigabytes) of information.

collections/tech/qsss/qsss_home.md

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 # Quantum Safe Storage System
 
+Our storage architecture follows the true peer2peer design of the cecentralized cloud system. 
+
 ![](img/qsss_intro2.png)
 
-Our storage architecture follows the true peer2peer design of the Decentralized Cloud System. Any participating node only stores small incomplete parts of objects (files, photos, movies, databases etc.) by offering a slice of the present (local) storage devices. Managing the storage and retrieval of all of these distributed fragments is done by a software that creates development or end-user interfaces for this storage algorithm. We call this '**dispersed storage**'.
+Any participating node only stores small incomplete parts of objects (files, photos, movies, databases etc.) by offering a slice of the present (local) storage devices. Managing the storage and retrieval of all of these distributed fragments is done by a software that creates development or end-user interfaces for this storage algorithm. We call this '**dispersed storage**'.
 
 ## Benefits
 

collections/tech/zos/zos_toc.md

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-## Zero OS as generator for Compute, Storage, Network capacity.
+## Zero OS as a generator for Compute, Storage, Network capacity
 
 ### Compute (uses CU)
 
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     - is our dedupe unique filesystem, replaces docker images. 
 - [ZOS Mount](zmount.md)     
     - is a mounted disk location on SSD, this can be used as faster storage location. 
-- [Quamtum Safe Filesystem](qss_filesystem.md)
+- [Quantum Safe Filesystem](qss_filesystem.md)
     - this is a super unique storage system, data can never be lost or corrupted. Please be reminded that this storage layer is only meant to be used for secondary storage applications.
 - [ZOS Disk](zdisk.md)
     - a virtual disk technology, only for TFTech OEM partners.
 
 ### There are 4 ways how networks can be connected to a Z-Machine.
 
-- [Mycelium = Planetary network](mycelium.md): 
+- [Mycelium = Planetary network](mycelium.md)
     - is a planetary scalable network, we have clients for windows, osx, android and iphone.
-- [ZOS NIC](znic.md): 
+- [ZOS NIC](znic.md)
     - connection to a public ipaddress
-- [WEB GW](webgw.md): 
+- [WEB GW](webgw.md)
     - web gateway, a secure way to allow internet traffic reach your secure Z-Machine.