collections/projectinca/collab.md

@@ -1,8 +1,8 @@
 ![](p2ppromotion.png)
 
-# Collaboration for our INCA launch
+# Collaboration for Our INCA Launch
 
-Lets all together work together on this document as well as on the stories which make up our planning.
+Let's all together work together on this document as well as on the stories which make up our planning.
 
 - [info_tfgrid = markdown docs for this wiki](https://git.ourworld.tf/tfgrid/info_tfgrid/src/branch/main/collections)
 - [stories, contributors only, ask access](https://git.ourworld.tf/tfgrid/depin_circle/issues)

collections/projectinca/funding.md

@@ -3,12 +3,12 @@
 
 # Funding INCA-G
 
-To be explored but sell of INCA-G's through e.g. SwissBorg might be good option
+Funding INCA-G needs to be explored further. Selling INCA-G NFT tokens through entities such as SwissBorg might be good option.
 
 # Funding Through Project Mycelium
 
-There will be a new project called Project Mycelium which will be all around the hero which will run on multiple clouds but ofcourse we will push ours. 
+There will be a new project called Project Mycelium. This project will be focused on the Hero super-tool. This will run on multiple clouds and we will also publish our own cloud versions.
 
-[First narative see this doc](https://docs.google.com/document/d/1H24yGqXi3pX9xljTviFPS9tI4hX1r6cSB3hBa0BTtCI). This project wants to fundraise +40m EUR and will also buy TFT. See the section about deploying 100,000 HERO's
+The first narrative version can be found [in this doc](https://docs.google.com/document/d/1H24yGqXi3pX9xljTviFPS9tI4hX1r6cSB3hBa0BTtCI). This project aims to fundraise +40m EUR and will also buy TFT. See the section about deploying 100,000 HERO's to have an overview of the demand for grid resources this project would generate.
 
-Project Mycelium will actively buy TFT as well a lot of TFT will be needed to run and expand the Project Mycelium.
+Project Mycelium will actively buy TFT and a lot of TFT will be needed to run and expand the Project Mycelium.

collections/projectinca/grants/grant_tf_3_13.md

@@ -2,23 +2,23 @@
 
 We did not do any grants for the last 2 years, its time to do at least a small catch up.
 
-There is a grant if 10m TFT foreseen for the work done by the codescalers & TF9 teams for the last 2 years.
+There is a grant of 10m TFT foreseen for the work done by the codescalers & TF9 teams for the last 2 years.
 
-## requirements
+## Requirements
 
-- the work has already been done
+- The work has already been done
 
-## requirements
+## Requirements
 
-- project is delivered
+- Project is delivered
     -  opensource
     -  customers operational
--  see https://dashboard.grid.tf/
+- See: https://dashboard.grid.tf/
 
 
 ## The tokens are vested
 
-- min price to sell 0.1 USD per TFT for 50% (means the developer can only sell their tokens once this price achieved)
+- Min price to sell 0.1 USD per TFT for 50% (means the developer can only sell their tokens once this price achieved)
-- min price to sell 0.15 USD per TFT for 50%
+- Min price to sell 0.15 USD per TFT for 50%
 
-this makes sure we don't add to the price pressure.
+This makes sure we don't add to the price pressure.

collections/projectinca/grants/grant_tf_3_14.md

@@ -2,22 +2,22 @@
 
 The teams are doing a lot of work on the next release which will give us much better supportability.
 
-There is a grant if 5m TFT foreseen for the work as will be done by the codescalers & TF9 teams.
+There is a grant of 5m TFT foreseen for the work as will be done by the codescalers & TF9 teams.
 
 ## requirements
 
-- the work as defined on [project management tool](https://git.ourworld.tf/tfgrid/circle_engineering/projects/28) is executed and delivered
+- The work as defined on [project management tool](https://git.ourworld.tf/tfgrid/circle_engineering/projects/28) is executed and delivered
-- project is delivered
+- Project is delivered
     -  opensource
     -  customers operational
-- result will be visible on https://dashboard.grid.tf/
+- Result will be visible on https://dashboard.grid.tf/
-- all is tested
+- All is tested
-- release is on mainnet
+- Release is on mainnet
 
 
 ## The tokens are vested
 
-- min price to sell 0.1 USD per TFT for 50% (means the developer can only sell their tokens once this price achieved)
+- Min price to sell 0.1 USD per TFT for 50% (means the developer can only sell their tokens once this price achieved)
-- min price to sell 0.15 USD per TFT for 50%
+- Min price to sell 0.15 USD per TFT for 50%
 
-this makes sure we don't add to the price pressure.
+This makes sure we don't add to the price pressure.

collections/projectinca/grants/grants.md

@@ -1,6 +1,4 @@
-
+# TFT Grants
-
-# Grants
 
 
 ```echarts
@@ -43,7 +41,7 @@ option = {
 };
 ```
 
-## Grants Treasury
+## TFT Grants Treasury
 
 - At least 180,000,000 TFT is available for Grants
   - projects defined below 
@@ -51,23 +49,28 @@ option = {
   - voting through INCA Connect
 - <10m  in locked pool (dead wallets)
   
-## voting process
+## Voting Process
 
-Initial projects are listed below.
+The voting process is as follows:
 
-- go to INCA Connect
+- Go to INCA Connect
-- see the projects
+- See the projects
-- vote + or -
+- Vote + or -
-- vote requests for projects need to be live for a minimum of 2 weeks
+- Vote requests for projects need to be live for a minimum of 2 weeks
-- votes are not free min 5 USD, but preferred 10 or more, the proceeds of votes go back to treasury
+- Votes are not free min 5 USD, but preferred 10 or more, the proceeds of votes go back to treasury
-- each project defines: min nr of votes, voting fee, if dedicated account, proper description, vesting scheme
+- Each project defines
-- everyone can see the projects on https://projectinca.info/projects and comment if logged in and accepted as commenter or moderator
+  - min nr of votes, voting fee, if dedicated account, proper description, vesting scheme
-- we need simple majority to have positive vote
+- Everyone can see the projects on https://projectinca.info/projects and comment if logged in and accepted as commenter or moderator
-- once positive vote the money goes in account created per project, there can be vesting on it, with acceleration
+- We need simple majority to have positive vote
-- we start by supporting Stellar, will also support Solana
+- Once positive vote the money goes in account created per project, there can be vesting on it, with acceleration
+- Supported chains
+  - We start by supporting Stellar
+  - Then we will also support Solana
 
 ## Reward Projects
 
+Initial projects are listed below.
+
 > Remark: all TFT are with vesting and have min execution price 0.1 USD per TFT or higher !
 
 - [AIBoxes](aiboxes.md) : 10m TFT
@@ -79,5 +82,4 @@ Initial projects are listed below.
 - [Biz dev rewards](biz_dev_rewards.md): 5% of raised token sales or other investments in TFT at 0.1 USD per TFT or higher.
 - [TFGrid 3.13](projectinca/grant_tf_3_13.md): 10m TFT
 - [TFGrid 3.14](projectinca/grant_tf_3_14.md): 5m TFT
-- [Thorchain DEX Launch](projectinca/grant_thorchain.md): 5m TFT
+- [Thorchain DEX Launch](projectinca/grant_thorchain.md): 5m TFT
-

collections/projectinca/grants/marketplace_grant.md

@@ -11,24 +11,25 @@ The marketplace will intitially be used to sell
 
 But many more services will be added.
 
-There is a grant if 5m TFT foreseen.
+There is a grant of 5m TFT foreseen.
 
 !!wiki.include page:'projectinca:marketplace_requirements.md'
 
 ## Process
 
-- parties let TFDMCC know that they are interested 
+- Parties let TFDMCC know that they are interested 
-- selection will be done based on experience with TF and development environment
+- Selection will be done based on experience with TF and development environment
-- development starts, tokens put on multisignature wallet
+- Development starts, tokens put on multisignature wallets
-- once project delivered & vesting criteria achieved developers can optionally sell TFT
+- Once project delivered & vesting criteria achieved developers can optionally sell TFT
 
 ## The tokens are vested
 
-- project is delivered
+- Project is delivered
     - opensource
     - working and operational with at least TF DMCC
     - first customers operational
-- min price to sell 0.1 USD per TFT for 50% (means the developer can only sell their tokens once this price achieved)
+- Min price to sell 0.1 USD per TFT for 50%
-- min price to sell 0.15 USD per TFT for 50%
+  - This means the developer can only sell their tokens once this price achieved
+- Min price to sell 0.15 USD per TFT for 50%
 
-this makes sure we don't add to the price pressure.
+This makes sure we don't add to the price pressure.

collections/projectinca/hero.md

@@ -1,19 +1,19 @@
 ![](hero.png)
 
-## A new project = Project Mycelium
+## A New Project = Project Mycelium
 
 > Project Mycelium: Digital Backbone for Network Societies
 
-The project which will launch our **HERO**.
+The project will launch our **HERO**, a super efficient digital companion.
 
 This project will do a new token and token sell, private and public. This project has the potential to fund a lot of the further ThreeFold Grid expansion (version 4). This project uses TFGrid 4.0 as the main cloud for its decentralization.
 
 **The first Digital Backbone in the world compatible with Web2, Web3 and AI.**:
 
-- Hero is our intelligent digital assistent with support for AI, Digital FreeZone, Web2, Web3, … Hero makes us a super efficient digital warrier (-:
+- Hero is our intelligent digital assistant with support for AI, Digital FreeZone, Web2, Web3, etc.: Hero makes us a super efficient digital warrior (-:
 - Hero Routers connect to the Mycelium network, they deliver the P2P connectivity with support for existing internet, LoranWAN, satellite, meshed fiber, meshed wireless and even 5G antennas for last mile connectivity.
 - Ther HERO nodes communicate to each other end2end encrypted looking for the shortest path.
-- New tracking & billing layer, based on mutual credit, everyone can now become a service provider on the Project Mycelium network and earn a passive income.
+- New tracking & billing layer, based on mutual credit, where everyone can now become a service provider on the Project Mycelium network and earn a passive income.
 
 ## TESTNET ON TFGRID CAN EAT ALL OUR CAPACITY
 

collections/projectinca/intro.md

@@ -1,13 +1,23 @@
-![alt text](intro.png)
-
-# Project INCA = ThreeFold DEPIN LAUNCH
-
 > CONFIDENDIAL INFORMATION
 
-Our aim is to create a decentralized future for ThreeFold by means of a launch in the DePIN ecosystem on top of Solana.
+![alt text](intro.png)
 
-### Why now
+# ThreeFold DePIN Launch: Project INCA
 
-- current marketcap < 40m USD
+## A New Phase for ThreeFold
-- marketcaps of other DePIN projects on Solana are > 1b USD
+
-- we are ready, the tech is rock solid and now we have the necessary support from a lot of parties
+Welcome to the Project INCA by ThreeFold.
+
+With the project INCA, we want to create a decentralized future for ThreeFold by means of a launch in the DePIN ecosystem on top of Solana.
+
+## Contributing to DePIN community
+
+The current marketcap of the project is under 40 million USD, while other DePIN projects have marketcaps of 1 billion USD and more. 
+
+We believe that ThreeFold is ready and has rock solid technology to offer to the DePIN space. We think that what ThreeFold has to offer is comptabile to this space and that we can work in parallel and under many if not all projects in the DePIN space.
+
+ThreeFold now has the necessary support from a lot of parties. We are entering a new exciting phase: Projet INCA.
+
+## Learn More
+
+Read this ebook to learn more about the project and how you can participate to this phase.

collections/projectinca/liquidity/liquidity.md

@@ -6,25 +6,25 @@
 
 ## Solana
 
-- our INCA will be released on Solana blockchain and we are relying on their ecosystem to provide liquidity
+Our INCA token will be released on Solana blockchain and we are relying on their ecosystem to provide liquidity.
 
-## DEX'es
+## DEXes
 
-we will partner with many DEX'es and make our token available where possible
+We will partner with many DEX'es and make our token available where possible.
 
 ## THORChain
 
-Amazing platform, super nice DEX, we need to find some cash to launch us on ThorChain.
+THORCHain is an amazing platform, with super nice DEX. We need to find some cash to launch us on this chain.
 
-## liquidcrypto
+## LiquidCrypto
 
-see [https://liquidcrypto.finance/](https://liquidcrypto.finance/)
+See [https://liquidcrypto.finance/](https://liquidcrypto.finance/)
 
-- a very nice platform, we can even whitelabel if that would be required.
+- A very nice platform, we can even whitelabel if that would be required.
-- works on many blockchain platforms and is very well integrated with many DEXes
+- Works on many blockchain platforms and is very well integrated with many DEXes
-- there will be an INCA liquidity pool, which can have parameters as defined by us.
+- There will be an INCA liquidity pool, which can have parameters as defined by us.
-    - this liquidity pool can be accessed from multiple blockchains e.g. Solana, Stellar, Ethereum based chains
+    - This liquidity pool can be accessed from multiple blockchains e.g. Solana, Stellar, Ethereum-based chains
 
-## Stellar (history)
+## Stellar (History)
 
-Existing mechanism is the stellar dex, is low liquidity and not very useful today.
+Existing mechanism is the Stellar DEX. It has low liquidity and is not very useful today.

collections/projectinca/peer2peer_promotion.md

@@ -2,19 +2,19 @@
 
 # Peer2Peer Promotion (P2PP)
 
-We believe we need to make our roll out quite viral.
+We believe the rollout must be viral. Here's how to achieve this.
 
-## Some ideas:
+## Some Ideas
 
 ### Expansion Rewards our TF Scouts:
 
 We expect the TF Scout to help newcomers to get onboarded. 
 
-We expect the TF Scout to do the followins 
+We expect the TF Scout to do the following:
 
-- make sure the person knows about TF and understands purpose & goal
+- Make sure the person knows about TF and understands its purpose & goal
-- instruct what INCA is and what we can do with it
+- Instruct what INCA is and what we can do with it
-- Make sure the new person has installed the TF Connect and has securely stored the private key. 
+- Make sure the new person has installed the TF Connect and has securely stored the private key
 - Make sure the newcomer understands what happens if the private key is lost
 
 **Reward**:
@@ -22,14 +22,14 @@ We expect the TF Scout to do the followins
 - TF Connect Installed -> 500 INCA
 - Referral to other person -> 50 INCA (after installing the TFConnect)
 - Stories as executed by P2PP Team
-  - can be regional
+  - Can be regional
-  - hit the forums
+  - Hit the forums
-  - organize events
+  - Organize events
 - Influencers
 
 ## Technical Requirements
 
-- new TFConnect 
+- New TFConnect 
-- new backend for TFConnect (can be run by TF DMCC)
+- New backend for TFConnect (can be run by TF DMCC)
-- referral system
+- Referral system
 

collections/projectinca/plan/marketplace.md

@@ -2,18 +2,18 @@
 
 We have reached a sizeable grid and want to promote commercialization for this we are introducing a market place and our next generation farming called TFGrid 4.0.
 
-This will make it a lot more easy for 3e parties to use our infrastructure
+This will make it a lot more easy for 3rd parties to use our infrastructure.
 
 The currency as used on the marketplace is INCA, there is a bridge between TFT and INCA.
 
-## benefits
+## Benefits
 
-- the hardware will be better used
+- The hardware will be better used
-- farmers can define their own price, means market mechanism define price in relation to quality and supply
+- Farmers can define their own price, means market mechanism define price in relation to quality and supply
-- easier for users to find right priced service
+- Easier for users to find right priced service
-- easier to monitor and enforce SLA's
+- Easier to monitor and enforce SLA's
-- easier to track utilization and expansion
+- Easier to track utilization and expansion
-- can and will be extended to other Internet/Cloud Services
+- Can and will be extended to other Internet/Cloud Services
 
 ## More info about our cloud & storage boxes.
 
@@ -26,7 +26,7 @@ The currency as used on the marketplace is INCA, there is a bridge between TFT a
 
 ## See grants in relation to our marketplace
 
-> please do not all TFT are with vesting and have min execution price 0.1 USD per TFT or higher !!!
+> Please do note that all TFT are with vesting and have a minimum execution price of 0.1 USD per TFT or higher !!!
 
 - [CloudBoxes](cloudboxes.md)
 - [StorageBoxes](storageboxes.md)

collections/projectinca/plan/tfgrid4.md

@@ -1,17 +1,17 @@
 # TFGrid 4
 
-Will be based on Zero-OS 4.0 and will be using more peer2peer concepts as well as our new network stack Mycelium.
+TFGrid 4.0 will be based on Zero-OS 4.0 and will be using more peer2peer concepts as well as our new network stack Mycelium.
-The network of 3Nodes running Zero-OS will use a marketplace as its front end
+The network of 3Nodes running Zero-OS will use a marketplace as its front end.
 
 ## NEW
 
-- simplified concept of [CloudBoxes](tfgrid4:cloudboxes.md) & [StorageBoxes](tfgrid4:storageboxes.md)
+- Simplified concept of [CloudBoxes](tfgrid4:cloudboxes.md) & [StorageBoxes](tfgrid4:storageboxes.md)
 - SLA management
 - More strict enforcement about suportability from a farming perspective
-- all farmers can set their pricing
+- All farmers can set their pricing
-- mutual credit based billing & tracking
+- Mutual credit based billing & tracking
-- introduction of 3bot as our personal System administrator
+- Introduction of 3bot as our personal System administrator
-- introduction of the INCA marketplace as the best way how to provision and manage workloads on the TFGrid 4.0
+- Introduction of the INCA marketplace as the best way how to provision and manage workloads on the TFGrid 4.0
 - INCA is the currency for TFGrid 4
 
 > TODO: and so much more

collections/projectinca/plan/theplan_c.md

@@ -5,23 +5,30 @@
 ThreeFold is expanding to the Depin market.
 
 - TFT is the token for the TFGrid 3.x
+  - It's our creator and founder token
 - INCA is the token for the TFGrid 4.x
-- During 2024 the price between INCA & TFT is fixed: 1 TFT buys 3 INCA
+  - It's our commercialization token
+  - It will be used on the INCA marketplace
+- During 2024 the price between INCA & TFT is fixed
+  - 1 TFT buys 3 INCA
 - From Jan 1 2025, the price is defined by market and will be in line to available INCA in liquidity pool.
 
-The TFT is our creator and founder tokens, INCA is for our commercialization.
+## Two New Tokens on Solana
 
-INCA will be used on our INCA marketplace
+We launch 2 new tokens called INCA and INCA-G.
 
-
+### INCA
-## We launch 2 new tokens called INCA and INCA-G
 
 > INCA = INternet CApacity (is the token of buying/selling Internet/Cloud Capacity)
 
-4 Billion INCA will be created, 3 can be bought by TFT holders, 1 Billion is to launch the next generation of our grid in the DePIN ecosystem
+- 4 billion INCA will be created
+  - 3 billion INCA can be bought by TFT holders transferring TFT to INCA (1 TFT buys 4 INCA)
+  - 1 billion INCA will be used to launch the next generation of our grid in the DePIN ecosystem
 
 <br>
 
+### INCA-G
+
 > INCA-G = INCA Generator (is a token generating INCA typically over 48 months)
 
 An INCA-G token generates INCA over a certain period. INCA stands for Internet Capacity token, enabling individuals to buy/sell Internet & Cloud Capacity.
@@ -30,58 +37,65 @@ We can analogize the generation of Cloud/Internet capacity to the generation of
 
 INCA-G tokens are unique and come with metadata specifying how INCA will be generated. This metadata outlines the generation schedule of INCA over the next X months.
 
-
 !!wiki.include page:'projectinca:inca.md'
 
-## How can people acquire an INCA-G token?
+## How to Acquire the INCA-G Token?
 
 ### Round 1: SwissBorg & TF Cooperative
 
-1 INCA-G token generates 15,000 INCA over 48 months
+1 INCA-G token generates 15,000 INCA over 48 months.
 
 1 INCA-G can be bought:
 
-- from SwissBorg for 500 CHF
+- From SwissBorg for 500 CHF
-  - crypto enabled bank in Switserland
+  - Crypto-enabled bank in Switzerland
   - Maximum sold is 5,000 INCA-G tokens
 - with TFT which is the founder creator currency of the current grid
-  - there will never be more than 1 billion TFT
+  - There will never be more than 1 billion TFT
   - 1 INCA-G token costs 10,000 TFT (\*)
 
 > (\*) The pricing will depend on price of TFT at that moment.
 
 ### Round 2: **A**frica and latin **A**merica INCA-G Tokens (AA)
 
-1 INCA-G AA Token, generates 10,000 INCA over 48 months
+1 INCA-G AA Token generates 10,000 INCA over 48 months.
 
 AA stands for Africa and latin America
 
-- from SwissBorg for TBD CHF.
+- From SwissBorg for *TBD* CHF.
   
 The incoming funds will be used to generate Cloud & Internet capacity in these regions, <br>which are serious growth regions in the world.
 
 
-## INCA governance
+## INCA Governance
 
 A Wisdom Council approves budgets in line to tokenomics above.
 
-- ThreeFold Wisdom Council, to be created, 9 people, 6 need to agree.
+The ThreeFold Wisdom Council will have 9 members in total. For any decision taken by the council, at least 6 must agree to go forward.
-  - 1 OurWorld (Kristof)
+
-  - 1 ThreeFold DMCC (Adnan)
+### Council Members
-  - 1 TF9 (Jan)
+
-  - 1 Sikana (Greg)
+We start with 7 members and 2 more members will need to be added later on.
-  - 1 CodeScalers (Nayer)
+
-  - 1 ThreeFold COOP (Sabrina), the COOP will still be created.
+- 1 OurWorld (Kristof)
-  - 1 GreenEdge (MWW)
+- 1 ThreeFold DMCC (Adnan)
-  - **we start with 7 but will need 2 more people*
+- 1 TF9 (Jan)
-- Budgets get allocated to projects on git.threefold.info, clear stories with clear budget allocations and cashflow tracking or time tracking.
+- 1 Sikana (Greg)
+- 1 CodeScalers (Nayer)
+- 1 ThreeFold COOP (Sabrina)
+  - The COOP project is still ongoing and will still be created.
+- 1 GreenEdge (MWW)
+
+### Budget Allocation
+
+- Budgets get allocated to projects on git.threefold.info
+- Clear stories with clear budget allocations and cashflow tracking or time tracking
 
 ## TFT
 
-Right now there are +-960m TFT, there can max be 4 Billion TFT.
+The total supply of TFT is currently around 960 million TFT, while the max supply is 1 billion TFT.
 
-
+## 3 Tokens: TFT, INCA & INCA-G 
-## Technical TFT, INCA & INCA-G 
 
 #### Implementation
 
@@ -93,5 +107,8 @@ All can and will be bridged on multiple blockchains.
 
 #### Metadata for INCA-G
 
-- release date
+Each INCA-G NFT contains information.
-- list of values, each value is nr of INCA's to be released in a month
+
+- Release date
+- List of values
+  - Each value is the number of INCA tokens to be released monthly for a given period of time

collections/projectinca/proj_info.md

@@ -1,6 +1,5 @@
 ![alt text](theplan.png)
 
-# project info
+# Project Info
 
-
+This section lists lots of info in relation to the why, what, etc.
-This section lists lots of info in relation to the why, what, ...

collections/projectinca/remuneration.md

@@ -1,27 +1,19 @@
-
 ![alt text](remuneration.png)
 
 # Remuneration
 
-Our aim is to get the marketcap to billions of USD which means we expect the INCA to reach potentially 1 USD, looking at what competition is doing this should be possible.
+Our aim is to get the marketcap to billions of USD which means we expect the INCA token to reach potentially 1 USD. Looking at what competition is doing, this should be possible.
 
 We believe the best way to remunerate our virtual teams is by rewarding INCA tokens with a vesting scheme.
 
+## Remuneration of Launch of this Project
 
-## remuneration of launch of this project
+- Up to 5,10 or max 20 million INCA for top contributors/advisors/influencers
-
-
-- upto 5,10 or max 20 million INCA for top contributors/advisors/influencers
 - 12% delivery at start, and then 8% per month after (in other words 1 year work)
-- all delivered INCA have accelerated vesting of 24 months
+- All delivered INCA have accelerated vesting of 24 months
-- accelerated vesting
+- Accelerated vesting
-  - if INCA gets above 0.5 CHF per INCA the vesting accelerates 50%
+  - If INCA gets above 0.5 CHF per INCA the vesting accelerates 50%
-  - if above 0.6 CHF 60% 
+  - If above 0.6 CHF 60% 
   - ... 
-  - if above 1 CHF 100% acceleration
+  - If above 1 CHF 100% acceleration
-- agreement with TF DMCC
+- Agreement with TF DMCC
-
-
-
-
-

collections/projectinca/teams.md

@@ -3,9 +3,9 @@
 
 ## Direct Promotion: PP2P teams
 
-- hit the forums
+- Hit the forums
-- use the referral based system for the P2PP 
+- Use the referral based system for the P2PP 
-- multiple teams, per region, can split to more regions e.g. Europe becomes 3 groups who become...
+- Multiple teams, per region, can split to more regions e.g. Europe becomes 3 groups who become 3 subgroups, etc.
 
 ## Marketing & Communication Coordination...
 
@@ -15,15 +15,15 @@
 
 ## Strategy, Funding
 
-- find funding for liquidity pools
+- Find funding for liquidity pools
 
-## token team
+## Token Team
 
 - David (Holochain)
 - Kristof (will also do the tech)
 - Florian
 - ?
 
-what
+## What
 
-- marketmaking
+- Marketmaking

collections/projectinca/tokens/inca.md

@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 
 ## High Level Tokenomics INCA
 
-There can never be more than 4 Billion INCA 
+There can never be more than 4 Billion INCA.
 
 - 3 Billion for TFT holders (1 TFT buys 3 INCA)
   - Will be sold uniquely to TFT Holders (the founders, creators and farmers of the current TFGrid)
@@ -11,13 +11,13 @@ There can never be more than 4 Billion INCA
   - Farming rewards
   - Can also be sold through partners e.g. SwissBorg (through INCA-G) and others...
 - 0.3 Billion for community expansion
-  - promotion of the TFGrid
+  - Promotion of the TFGrid
-  - creation of technology on top of the TF Grid
+  - Creation of technology on top of the TFGrid
-  - peer2peer promotion program
+  - Peer2peer promotion program
-- 0.2 Billion for Depin TF Team with 24 months accelerated vesting.
+- 0.2 Billion for Depin ThreeFold Team with 24 months accelerated vesting
   - 5 % of total
-  - is for people who help to expand the Grid (starting now)
+  - It's for people who help to expand the Grid (starting now)
-  - a lot of it is to reward our partners to help launch the INCA Tokens & the TF Grid
+  - A lot of it is to reward our partners to help launch the INCA Tokens & the TFGrid
 
 
 ```echarts
@@ -53,4 +53,4 @@ option = {
 };
 ```
 
-*Accelerated Vesting means: if INCA gets above 0.5 CHF per INCA the vesting accelerates 50%, if above 0.6 CHF 60%, ... if above 1 CHF 100% acceleration.*
+*Accelerated Vesting means: if INCA gets above 0.5 CHF per INCA (50%), the vesting accelerates in proportion to the percentage (e.g. 0.6 CHF per INCA = 60$ acceleration). At 1 CHF per INCA (100%) and more, the acceleration is 100%.*

collections/projectinca/tokens/tft.md

@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 ## TFT main stats
 
-Right now about 5 million TFT are farmed (mined) per month, this will become more as more nodes are being added, about 294,000,000 TFT have been farmed so far.
+Right now about 5 million TFT are farmed (mined) per month. This number wil increase as more nodes are being added. About 294,000,000 TFT have been farmed so far.
 
 ```echarts
 option = {
@@ -38,31 +38,31 @@ option = {
 };
 ```
 
-- Rivine minted: 112,862,249
+- Rivine-minted TFT: 112,862,249
-- Stellar: 181,262,054
+- Stellar-minted TFT: 181,262,054
 
-### TFT supply over 1 Billion changes!!!
+### TFT Supply Over 1 Billion Changes!!!
 
 From 1 Billion TFT the farming rules will change to make sure that each farming capacity is used by real users in the field, we don't just want to burn energy.
 
-The rules from jan 1 2025 or 1 billion TFT whatever is first
+The rules from Jan 1 2025 or 1 billion TFT whatever is first will be as follows:
 
 - 2 year lockup of farmed tokens
 - after 6 months, accelerated vesting (means tokens unlock) once utilization is 30% for more than 3 months 
-- utilization is onde on INCA Portal, so we know they are real customers with real needs
+- Utilization is done on INCA Portal, so we know they are real customers with real needs
-- the farming reward will be expressed in chosen stable coin e.g. EUR or Gold but rewarded in TFT
+- The farming reward will be expressed in chosen stable coin e.g. EUR or Gold, but rewarded in TFT
-- SLA's and uptime will be monitored carefully, if not achieved no farming
+- SLA's and uptime will be monitored carefully, if not achieved, there will be no farming
-- farmer is part of farming pool or is a certified farmer themselves (with SAL, T&C signed, ...)
+- Farmer is part of farming pool or is a certified farmer themselves (with SAL, T&C signed, etc.)
 
-This will make sure that
+This will make sure that:
 
-- there is no fake capacity and the quality good enough
+- There is no fake capacity and the quality is good
-- the nodes are used properly by real customers
+- The nodes are used properly by real customers
-- there is minimal sales pressure on the TFT
+- There is minimal sales pressure on the TFT
 
 ### Active tokens
 
-View is as planned for end 2024
+View is as planned for end 2024:
 
 ```echarts
 option = {
@@ -99,6 +99,6 @@ option = {
 };
 ```
 
-*the values above are estimate but ofcourse the totals are correct, we don't have full visibility on all detail wallets*
+*The values above are estimate in some cases as we don't have full visibility and details for all wallets, but of course the totals are correct.*
 
-For the Grants see [the Grants Document](grants.md)
+For the Grants, see [the Grants Document](grants.md).

collections/tfgrid4/boxes/aibox.md

@@ -2,32 +2,32 @@
 
 !!wiki.include page:'box_intro.md'
 
-Is a unit of AI capacity (GPU or future TPU driven)
+An AI box is a unit of AI capacity (GPU or future TPU driven).
 
-- the mininal GPU supported for now is a Nvidia 4090 or comparable
+- The mininal GPU supported for now is a Nvidia 4090 or comparable
 
 An AI box can be launched in our Zero-OS and can enable any possible AI workload.
 
 ## AI Hour (AH)
 
-Is like a kwatth unit for electricty, it represents a AI Box being used for 1h and billed as such.
+AI hour (AH) is like a kwatth unit for electricty: it represents a AI Box being used for 1h and billed as such.
 
 INCA Hosts (our cloud providers) can price the AI Hour themselves in a chosen currency.
 
 ## AI Box Properties
 
-The service provider (hoster) defines the following properties per AI Box
+The service provider (hoster) defines the following properties per AI Box:
 
-- type of GPU
+- Type of GPU
-- price per hour
+- Price per hour
-- discounts if used for longer periods & if renter has large amount of TFT in wallet
+- Discounts if used for longer periods & if renter has large amount of TFT in wallet
-- max bandwidth
+- Max bandwidth
-- min bandwidth (min 1 mbit/sec)
+- Min bandwidth (min 1 mbit/sec)
-- cost per GB bandwidth if any
+- Cost per GB bandwidth if any
-- max aggregation size (how many of the AI Boxes can be combined in one node if relevant)
+- Max aggregation size (how many of the AI Boxes can be combined in one node if relevant)
-- link to support site if any (find info about hoster and service capabilities)
+- Link to support site if any (find info about hoster and service capabilities)
-- if linked to Hosting Pool (company giving support on the machines)
+- If linked to Hosting Pool (company giving support on the machines)
-- location & type of location
+- Location & type of location
 
 Each AI Box has unique ID and can be looked at through a portal (or found).
 

collections/tfgrid4/boxes/box_intro.md

@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 
 A Cloud, Storage or AI Box is a part of a server/computer (3Node) which delivers a service which has well defined properties in relation to capacity, pricing, serviceabity, capabilities.
 
-These loud, Storage or AI Boxes can be bought by the INCA/TF Community through the INCA marketplace.
+These Cloud, Storage or AI Boxes can be bought by the INCA/TF Community through the INCA marketplace.
 
-The boxes are hosted in 3Nodes.
+The boxes are hosted on 3Nodes.
 

collections/tfgrid4/boxes/cloudbox.md

@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
 
 ## CloudBox (CB)
 
-Is a unit of compute, fast storage and memory.
+A cloudbox is a unit of compute, fast storage and memory.
 There are unlimited different configurations of cloudboxes.
 
 A configuration of a machine defines the cloudboxes which can be made.
@@ -26,7 +26,7 @@ Terms
 
 ## CloudHour (CH)
 
-Is like a kwatth unit for electricty, it represents a cloudbox being used for 1h and billed as such.
+A cloudhour is like a kwatth unit for electricty: it represents a cloudbox being used for 1h and billed as such.
 
 INCA Hosts (our cloud providers) can price the CloudHour themselves in a chosen currency.
 
@@ -34,22 +34,22 @@ INCA Hosts (our cloud providers) can price the CloudHour themselves in a chosen
 
 The service provider (hoster) defines the following properties per cloud box
 
-- cost of 1 CloudHour (use the box for 1h)
+- Cost of 1 CloudHour (use the box for 1h)
-- discounts if used for longer periods & if renter has large amount of TFT in wallet
+- Discounts if used for longer periods & if renter has large amount of TFT in wallet
-- min available storage in GB (min 50)
+- Min available storage in GB (min 50)
-- max available storage in GB
+- Max available storage in GB
-- min passmark, max passmark
+- Min passmark, max passmark
-- max bandwidth
+- Max bandwidth
-- min bandwidth (min 1 mbit/sec)
+- Min bandwidth (min 1 mbit/sec)
-- cost per GB bandwidth
+- Cost per GB bandwidth
-- cost for additional storage HDD or SSD per GB/month
+- Cost for additional storage HDD or SSD per GB/month
-  - max additional storage
+  - Max additional storage
-- max aggregation size (how many of the cloudboxes can be combined)
+- Max aggregation size (how many of the cloudboxes can be combined)
-- link to support site if any (find info about hoster and service capabilities)
+- Link to support site if any (find info about hoster and service capabilities)
-- if linked to Hosting Pool (company giving support on the machines)
+- If linked to Hosting Pool (company giving support on the machines)
-- pub ip address possible or not (is option)
+- Pub ip address possible or not (is option)
-- link to monitoring page (if any)
+- Link to monitoring page (if any)
-- location & type of location
+- Location & type of location
 
 Each cloudbox has unique ID and can be looked at through a portal (or found).
 

collections/tfgrid4/boxes/storagebox.md

@@ -4,31 +4,31 @@
 
 ## StorageBox (SB)
 
-Is a unit of ZDB storage as can be used as backend for Zero-Stor (our quantum safe storage system)
+A storagebox is a unit of ZDB storage as can be used as backend for Zero-Stor (our quantum safe storage system).
 
-The default cloudbox has 
+The default cloudbox has:
 
 - 100GB of storage
 
 ## StorageHour (SH)
 
-Is like a kwatth unit for electricty, it represents a storagebox being used for 1h and billed as such.
+A storagehour is like a kwatth unit for electricty, it represents a storagebox being used for 1h and billed as such.
 
 INCA Hosts (our cloud providers) can price the StorageHour themselves in a chosen currency.
 
 ## StorageBox Properties
 
-The service provider (hoster) defines the following properties per StorageBox
+The service provider (hoster) defines the following properties per StorageBox:
 
-- min size in GB (100GB+), max size
+- Min size in GB (100GB+), max size
-- discounts if used for longer periods & if renter has large amount of TFT in wallet
+- Discounts if used for longer periods & if renter has large amount of TFT in wallet
-- max bandwidth
+- Max bandwidth
-- min bandwidth (min 1 mbit/sec)
+- Min bandwidth (min 1 mbit/sec)
-- cost per GB bandwidth
+- Cost per GB bandwidth
-- max aggregation size (how many of the storage boxes can be combined)
+- Max aggregation size (how many of the storage boxes can be combined)
-- link to support site if any (find info about hoster and service capabilities)
+- Link to support site if any (find info about hoster and service capabilities)
-- if linked to Hosting Pool (company giving support on the machines)
+- If linked to Hosting Pool (company giving support on the machines)
-- location & type of location
+- Location & type of location
 
 Each StorageBox has unique ID and can be looked at through a portal (or found).
 

hero_mdbook.sh

@@ -0,0 +1,64 @@
+#!/bin/bash
+
+# Generate opening text.
+cat <<EOF
+
+* * * * *
+
+Welcome!
+
+The script will install hero and set the environment to work with mdbook.
+This will take a couple of minutes.
+
+* * * * *
+
+EOF
+
+sleep 2
+
+# Disable "Pending kernel upgrade" and  "Daemons using outdated libraries" windows
+sed -i "s/#\$nrconf{kernelhints} = -1;/\$nrconf{kernelhints} = -1;/g" /etc/needrestart/needrestart.conf
+sed -i "/#\$nrconf{restart} = 'i';/s/.*/\$nrconf{restart} = 'a';/" /etc/needrestart/needrestart.conf
+
+# Update and install dependencies
+apt-get update
+apt-get install -y lsb-release gpg
+curl https://sh.rustup.rs -sSf | sh -s -- -y
+source "$HOME/.cargo/env"
+export PATH=$PATH:/root/.cargo/bin
+/root/.cargo/bin/cargo install mdbook
+curl -fsSL https://packages.redis.io/gpg | gpg --dearmor -o /usr/share/keyrings/redis-archive-keyring.gpg
+echo "deb [signed-by=/usr/share/keyrings/redis-archive-keyring.gpg] https://packages.redis.io/deb $(lsb_release -cs) main" | tee /etc/apt/sources.list.d/redis.list
+apt-get update
+apt-get install -y redis pkg-config gcc libssl-dev
+
+# Download and run the hero installer script
+curl https://raw.githubusercontent.com/freeflowuniverse/crystallib/development/scripts/installer_hero.sh > /tmp/hero_install.sh
+bash /tmp/hero_install.sh
+
+# Start the SSH agent, run hero mdbook and build the mdbook
+eval $(ssh-agent)
+hero mdbook -u https://git.ourworld.tf/tfgrid/info_tfgrid/src/branch/main/heroscript
+cd /root/hero/var/mdbuild/duniayetu
+mdbook build
+
+# Generate closing text after successful script.
+cat <<EOF
+
+* * * * *
+
+The script has been successfully completed.
+
+To see the mdbook live on your browser, 
+run the following command with the proper port (here we use 3333).
+
+mdbook serve --hostname 0.0.0.0 --port 3333
+
+Happy mdbooking!
+
+* * * * *
+
+EOF
+
+# Send stderr to null and exit gracefully
+return 2> /dev/null; exit