collections/projectinca/tokens/tft.md

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 ## TFT main stats
 
-Right now about 5 million TFT are farmed (mined) per month, this will become more as more nodes are being added, about 294,000,000 TFT have been farmed so far.
+Right now about 5 million TFT are farmed (mined) per month. This number wil increase as more nodes are being added. About 294,000,000 TFT have been farmed so far.
 
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-- Rivine minted: 112,862,249
-- Stellar: 181,262,054
+- Rivine-minted TFT: 112,862,249
+- Stellar-minted TFT: 181,262,054
 
-### TFT supply over 1 Billion changes!!!
+### TFT Supply Over 1 Billion Changes!!!
 
 From 1 Billion TFT the farming rules will change to make sure that each farming capacity is used by real users in the field, we don't just want to burn energy.
 
-The rules from jan 1 2025 or 1 billion TFT whatever is first
+The rules from Jan 1 2025 or 1 billion TFT whatever is first will be as follows:
 
 - 2 year lockup of farmed tokens
 - after 6 months, accelerated vesting (means tokens unlock) once utilization is 30% for more than 3 months 
-- utilization is onde on INCA Portal, so we know they are real customers with real needs
-- the farming reward will be expressed in chosen stable coin e.g. EUR or Gold but rewarded in TFT
-- SLA's and uptime will be monitored carefully, if not achieved no farming
-- farmer is part of farming pool or is a certified farmer themselves (with SAL, T&C signed, ...)
+- Utilization is done on INCA Portal, so we know they are real customers with real needs
+- The farming reward will be expressed in chosen stable coin e.g. EUR or Gold, but rewarded in TFT
+- SLA's and uptime will be monitored carefully, if not achieved, there will be no farming
+- Farmer is part of farming pool or is a certified farmer themselves (with SAL, T&C signed, etc.)
 
-This will make sure that
+This will make sure that:
 
-- there is no fake capacity and the quality good enough
-- the nodes are used properly by real customers
-- there is minimal sales pressure on the TFT
+- There is no fake capacity and the quality is good
+- The nodes are used properly by real customers
+- There is minimal sales pressure on the TFT
 
 ### Active tokens
 
-View is as planned for end 2024
+View is as planned for end 2024:
 
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-*the values above are estimate but ofcourse the totals are correct, we don't have full visibility on all detail wallets*
+*The values above are estimate in some cases as we don't have full visibility and details for all wallets, but of course the totals are correct.*
 
-For the Grants see [the Grants Document](grants.md)
+For the Grants, see [the Grants Document](grants.md).