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-### Why?
+### The Problem
 
-Traditional firewalls are increasingly ineffective in addressing modern security challenges. They struggle to mitigate emerging threats, particularly against backdoors and man-in-the-middle attacks. Backdoors can render firewalls obsolete as attackers find ways to bypass them. New, innovative approaches to cybersecurity are necessary to address these evolving security problems.
+Traditional firewalls are increasingly ineffective at addressing modern security challenges. They struggle to mitigate emerging threats, particularly against backdoors and man-in-the-middle attacks. Backdoors can render firewalls obsolete as attackers find ways to bypass them. New and innovative approaches to cybersecurity are necessary to address these evolving security problems.
 
-## What?
+## Introducing NetworkWall
 
 Imagine a scenario where you deploy applications within secure, liquid-cooled physical containers or smaller POD's that operate without relying on traditional TCP/IP or Ethernet protocols. By avoiding the use of standard low-level protocols, the existing backdoors are unable to communicate with the external world.
 
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 It's important to note that this solution is primarily intended for commercial use cases, but its existence is valuable knowledge in the realm of cybersecurity and network security.
 
-## Benefits
+## The Benefits
 
-- **Enhanced Security and Privacy:** The solution offers significantly improved security and privacy measures, mitigating potential risks and vulnerabilities.
-- **Ultra-Fast Connectivity:** Within the POD/Container, the connectivity is exceptionally fast, ensuring rapid data transfer and application performance.
-- **Robust Data and Application-Aware Proxies:** Secure proxies between the Internet and the protected backend application provide an additional layer of security, safeguarding data and ensuring application-level awareness.
-- **Seamless Integration:** The solution is designed for ease of integration within existing environments, minimizing disruptions and complexities during implementation.
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+- **Enhanced security and privacy:** the solution offers significantly improved security and privacy measures, mitigating potential risks and vulnerabilities.
+- **Ultra-fast connectivity:** within the POD/Container, connectivity is exceptionally fast, ensuring rapid data transfer and application performance.
+- **Robust data and application aware proxies:** secure proxies between the Internet and the protected backend application provide an additional layer of security, safeguarding data and ensuring application-level awareness.
+- **Seamless integration:** the solution is designed for ease of integration within existing environments, minimizing disruptions and complexities during implementation.
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