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 #  ThreeFold Grid Technology
 
+ThreeFold has developed a highly efficient infrastructure layer for a new Internet.
 
-ThreeFold has developed a highly efficient infrastructure layer for a new internet.
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-Providing Internet & Cloud capacity is as easy as buying or building a node and connecting it to the internet.
+Providing Internet & cloud capacity is as easy as getting a node and connecting it to the Internet.
 
 ![](3node_simple.png)
 
-A lot of capacity has been deployed in the world, ThreeFold farmers buy a computer and they connect it to the internet, as such they use our operating system to provide Internet capacity to the world.
+A lot of capacity has been deployed in the world, hundreds of ThreeFold farmers acquired a computer and connected it to the Internet, as such they use our operating system to provide Internet capacity to the world. Farmers can buy pre-built node or build their own via our DIY guides.
 
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-There are multiple ways in which people can interact with our platform (as a developer or IT an expert: sysadmin):
+There are multiple ways in which people can interact with our platform, as a developer, a sysadmin, IT expert, etc.
 
 ![](img/architecture_usage.png)  
 
-All technology is developed by ThreeFold and is opensource, this technology is being used for the ThreeFold grid (see https://www.threefold.io) which is the deployment of a new internet which is green, safe and owned by all of us.
+All technology is developed by ThreeFold and is opensource, this technology is being used for the ThreeFold grid (see the [ThreeFold Website](https://www.threefold.io)) which is the deployment of a new Internet which is green, safe and owned by all of us.
 
 This document explains how ThreeFold is the missing layer for the full web2, web3 and blockchain world.