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@@ -34,16 +34,16 @@ The fourth generation of ThreeFold is a decentralized and self-healing ecosystem
 ThreeFold's Web4 is composed of revolutionary tools providing a truly decentralized Internet:
 
 - **Web4 Phones**
-  - Secure smartphones built-in with decentralized apps
+  - Secure smartphones with built-in decentralized apps
 - **TF Genie**
   - AI-driven virtual assistants directly on your secure phone
 - **Web4 Nodes**
   - The backbone of the Web4 cloud offering compute and data resources
 - **Web4 Routers**
-  - Routers always finding the shortest path, linking the nodes and phones altogether
+  - Routers always finding the shortest path, linking the nodes and phones together
 
 ![](./img/web4_overview.png)
 
-Those products redefine digital autonomy in a concrete and practical manner.
+These products redefine digital autonomy in a concrete and practical manner.
 
-> Read forward to learn more about this innovative system and how you can build it with us.
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+> Read on to learn more about this innovative system and how you can build it with us.