Review the threefold.io storyline, ensure it's as simple and clear as possible ... #76

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opened 2024-02-16 13:05:22 +00:00 by gosam · 1 comment
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  • Review with florian and sacha
  • Make improvements to text across pages

Some points of feedback below in the comments

- [ ] Review with florian and sacha - [ ] Make improvements to text across pages Some points of feedback below in the comments
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From Flo:

On the text, sentences for me or very long and complex : ThreeFold delivers a sovereign, scalable, peer-to-peer, and co-owned infrastructure layer on top of which to build a new Internet. This is just many adjectives. You may loose most of the people here if not hyper technical. Should we start by what problem it is solving? The why?

We put our main technology(Mycellium) on the same level that Tanzania willing to deploy it. Somehow we should keep things on one side very agnostic and focused on the technology and then talk about Tanzania and have a picture with the minister. It feels like we mix the core tech with the news so it does not look professional/solid. Even if I agree that this should be helping to show we are real and have real world application of our technology coming.

I think we keep talking about new internet but this is what has been confusing most of the people. It is a peer to peer network connecting people who want to share information, run applications etc... talking about new internet makes it not possible in most people heads or even worst they think we want to replace the internet but they love the internet and they don't think it is broken at all.

From Flo: On the text, sentences for me or very long and complex : ThreeFold delivers a sovereign, scalable, peer-to-peer, and co-owned infrastructure layer on top of which to build a new Internet. This is just many adjectives. You may loose most of the people here if not hyper technical. Should we start by what problem it is solving? The why? We put our main technology(Mycellium) on the same level that Tanzania willing to deploy it. Somehow we should keep things on one side very agnostic and focused on the technology and then talk about Tanzania and have a picture with the minister. It feels like we mix the core tech with the news so it does not look professional/solid. Even if I agree that this should be helping to show we are real and have real world application of our technology coming. I think we keep talking about new internet but this is what has been confusing most of the people. It is a peer to peer network connecting people who want to share information, run applications etc... talking about new internet makes it not possible in most people heads or even worst they think we want to replace the internet but they love the internet and they don't think it is broken at all.
Sachaobg was assigned by gosam 2024-02-16 13:07:03 +00:00
gosam self-assigned this 2024-02-16 13:07:03 +00:00
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