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From: Sam <sam@samtaggart.com>
Date: Wed, 3 Mar 2021 10:40:59 +0300
Subject: [PATCH] Edit first sentence

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 subtitle: Welcome to ThreeFold
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-With game-changing technology and incredible partners, we are building a better Internet for humanity and for our planet. The ThreeFold Internet brings privacy and security, gives us all back ownership of our digital lives, can be made available everywhere, and uses much less energy than today's solution.
+With game-changing technology and incredible partners, we are building a better Internet – for humanity and for our planet. The ThreeFold peer-to-peer Internet delivers on privacy and security, gives us all back ownership of our digital lives, can be made available everywhere in the world, and uses much less energy than today's solution. It is the foundation for a more fair and equal tomorrow. And it is live, today.
 
 <!-- We are building the next generation peer-to-peer internet infrastructure. After creating a powerful and super sustainable operating system that can host all of humanity's digital needs and data in smart contracts, we are now creating a fair, equal and private Internet experience to free humanity from the tech giants that exploit our data.
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