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                     <h1 class="fade-in text-balance text-4xl font-normal tracking-tight text-white lg:text-5xl">When 3 Becomes 4</h1>
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-                    The Internet is a Trillion USD business and we want to make sure this Internet is built and owned by all of us—An Internet created by Everyone for Everyone. <br><br>
+                      The internet is a trillion-dollar industry, and we believe it should be built and owned by everyone—an internet created by all, for all. <br><br>
-                    Web4 is the logical evolution of the Internet and opens the door for Machines & Humans to create together a new form of Intelligence with respect for the Planet & People.<br><br>
+                    Web4 represents the natural evolution of the internet, enabling humans and machines to collaborate in creating a new form of intelligence that respects both the planet and the people.<br><br>
-                    ThreeFold has been working on this vision for more than 10 years 
+                    For over a decade, ThreeFold has been dedicated to realize this vision, and we’re excited to announce
-                    and is now ready to announce our next steps on <span class="font-semibold">December 12, 2024. </span
+                    our next steps on <span class="font-semibold">December 12, 2024. </span>
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-        <h2 class="text-balance font-normal tracking-tight text-white lg:text-6xl text-5xl fade-in">We are Building <br>a New Internet</h2>
+        <h2 class="text-balance font-normal tracking-tight text-white lg:text-6xl text-5xl fade-in">We are Building a New Internet</h2>
-        <p class="mx-auto mt-8 max-w-3xl text-pretty lg:text-2xl text-xl font-light text-gray-200 fade-in">A system built to scale to a planetary level, compatible with AI, Cloud, Web2, Web3... Capable to provide 100% uptime, and enables any machine and human to communicate over the shortest path.</p>
+        <p class="mx-auto mt-8 max-w-3xl text-pretty lg:text-2xl text-xl font-light text-gray-200 fade-in">A system built to scale to a planetary level, compatible with AI, Cloud, Web2, and Web3. Capable to provide 100% uptime, and enables any machine and human to communicate over the shortest path.</p>
-        <p class="mx-auto mt-6 max-w-3xl text-pretty lg:text-2xl text-xl font-light text-gray-200 fade-in">That's <span class="font-semibold">ThreeFold's</span></p>
+        <p class="mx-auto mt-6 max-w-3xl text-pretty lg:text-3xl text-2xl font-light text-gray-200 fade-in">That's <span class="font-semibold">ThreeFold's Web4</span></p>
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-        <h1 class="text-balance font-normal tracking-tight text-white lg:text-8xl text-8xl fade-in"> Web4</h2>
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           <a href="https://docs.threefold.io/docs/introduction" class="fade-in rounded-2xl bg-white px-4 py-2.5 text-sm font-semibold text-black shadow-sm hover:bg-gray-200 hover:text-gray-800 focus-visible:outline focus-visible:outline-2 focus-visible:outline-offset-2 focus-visible:outline-offset-2">Get Started</a>
           <a href="/what" target="_blank" class=" fade-in text-sm/6 font-semibold text-white hover:text-gray-400">What We've Built <span aria-hidden="true">→</span></a>