From 5c0211821bced54f3971df04af810f524bf0e118 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: ehab-hassan Date: Mon, 4 Oct 2021 19:53:31 +0200 Subject: [PATCH] update text --- content/page/grid/brandPanel/index.md | 4 ++-- content/page/grid/brandPanel2/index.md | 3 ++- content/page/grid/brandPanel3/index.md | 10 +++++----- content/page/grid/cta/cta.md | 6 +++--- content/page/grid/grid.md | 4 ++-- content/page/home/brandPanel2/brandPanel2.md | 2 +- content/page/home/brandPanel3/brandPanel3.md | 2 +- content/page/home/home.md | 2 +- content/page/home/partenerships/partner1/index.md | 2 +- content/page/home/partenerships/partner2/index.md | 4 ++-- content/page/mission/mission.md | 4 ++-- content/page/tft/tft.md | 4 ++-- 12 files changed, 24 insertions(+), 23 deletions(-) diff --git a/content/page/grid/brandPanel/index.md b/content/page/grid/brandPanel/index.md index bde9503ab..a74161ed7 100644 --- a/content/page/grid/brandPanel/index.md +++ b/content/page/grid/brandPanel/index.md @@ -1,8 +1,8 @@ --- id: grid_brandPanel -title: AN ENDLESSLY SCALABLE DIGITAL NETWORK +title: an endlessly scalable cloud network btnTxt: Learn about TFT sourceUrl: /token image: endless.png # src/assets/brandPanel/.. --- -By connecting compute, storage and network capacity to the ThreeFold Grid, anyone can join an open and inclusive Internet ecosystem that supports the realization of a truly inter-connected world, and earn income in the form of TFT. +The ThreeFold Grid is formed by an incentivized ecosystem of people that connect cloud capacity anywhere electricity and bandwidth is present. Together they support the realization of a democratized cloud infrastructure and earn income in the form of TFT. diff --git a/content/page/grid/brandPanel2/index.md b/content/page/grid/brandPanel2/index.md index 2d6d7ca76..56c47235d 100644 --- a/content/page/grid/brandPanel2/index.md +++ b/content/page/grid/brandPanel2/index.md @@ -5,4 +5,5 @@ btnTxt: "See Who's Building On The Grid" sourceUrl: /partners image: internet_reimagine.jpg # src/assets/brandPanel/.. --- -Any current and future digital workload can be hosted natively on ThreeFold with minimum migration including cloud alternatives, blockchains, IoT networks, decentralized organizations and applications. +Any current and future digital workload can be hosted natively on ThreeFold via smart contract with minimum migration, including cloud alternatives, blockchains, IoT networks, decentralized organizations and applications. + diff --git a/content/page/grid/brandPanel3/index.md b/content/page/grid/brandPanel3/index.md index d77aef32a..b2b0ce207 100644 --- a/content/page/grid/brandPanel3/index.md +++ b/content/page/grid/brandPanel3/index.md @@ -1,10 +1,10 @@ --- id: grid_brandPanel3 title: THE POWER OF OPEN-SOURCE -btnTxt: Hardware Options -sourceUrl: https://threefold.io/farming/pre-order -btnTxt2: Do-it-Yourself -sourceUrl2: https://library.threefold.me/info/tfgrid/#/farming/farming_manual +btnTxt: +sourceUrl: '' +btnTxt2: +sourceUrl2: '' image: open_source.jpg # src/assets/brandPanel/.. --- -Most modern computers can be booted with ThreeFold’s operating-system, Zero-OS. All you need is electricity, bandwidth and compatible hardware to connect capacity to the network. +The ThreeFold Grid combines pioneering technologies to provide unparalleled efficiency and privacy to decentralized applications, systems and societies. It is the first cloud infrastructure to be made open-source and available for everyone to review or use as they see fit. diff --git a/content/page/grid/cta/cta.md b/content/page/grid/cta/cta.md index 99c72375e..a75001435 100644 --- a/content/page/grid/cta/cta.md +++ b/content/page/grid/cta/cta.md @@ -2,9 +2,9 @@ id: grid_cta title: ZERO OS image: ./zero_os.png -button: How It Works -link: /how-it-works +button: Learn More +link: /tech button2: Bootstrap Your Node link2: https://library.threefold.me/info/tfgrid/#/farming/farming_manual --- -An autonomous and lightweight operating system that achieves unmatched levels of efficiency and security. It has no shell or remote control, making it impossible for humans to access user data on the hardware level, and it was designed to be the most efficient software environment. With powerful compute, storage and network features and its industry-leading efficiency, Zero-OS can host anything that runs on Linux, but better. +A self-driving and lightweight operating system that can be booted on most modern computers. Once installed, Zero-OS locks the hardware and makes it accessible only via the ThreeFold Blockchain. No technical knowledge or maintenance is required, allowing anyone to join the cloud revolution. diff --git a/content/page/grid/grid.md b/content/page/grid/grid.md index 7da6dc0eb..8e6eb5159 100644 --- a/content/page/grid/grid.md +++ b/content/page/grid/grid.md @@ -1,13 +1,13 @@ --- id: grid metaTitle: ThreeFold | Grid -metaDesc: The ThreeFold Grid is an open system which allows anyone to become a node in the emerging digital economy. It opens a new Internet era free from censorship, user tracking and privacy breaches. +metaDesc: Powered by the ThreeFold Blockchain, anyone can now provide and utilize cloud capacity without any intermediaries. A new cloud era has arrived, one governed by the people. metaImg: ./grid_header.png header_slogan: header_title: THE THREEFOLD GRID header_image: ./grid_header.png header_altImg: threefold -header_excerpt: The ThreeFold Grid is an open system which allows anyone to become a node in the emerging digital economy. It opens a new Internet era free from censorship, user tracking and privacy breaches. +header_excerpt: Powered by the ThreeFold Blockchain, anyone can now provide and utilize cloud capacity without any intermediaries. A new cloud era has arrived, one governed by the people. solution_image: button: Take Part link: "#zero_os" diff --git a/content/page/home/brandPanel2/brandPanel2.md b/content/page/home/brandPanel2/brandPanel2.md index 231538925..4ac2fd34f 100644 --- a/content/page/home/brandPanel2/brandPanel2.md +++ b/content/page/home/brandPanel2/brandPanel2.md @@ -7,4 +7,4 @@ btnTxt: Know More image: p4p_new.png # src/assets/brandPanel/.. --- -The ThreeFold Grid is formed by people connecting capacity to our network. These people are known as farmers. Together with a growing number of farmers, we have achieved a new internet which allows everyone to learn, partake and succeed. +The ThreeFold Grid is formed by farmers, people that connect cloud capacity to our network. Together, we have achieved a new globally distributed cloud that flips the traditional IT model upside down and allows for a new paradigm – by the people, for the people. \ No newline at end of file diff --git a/content/page/home/brandPanel3/brandPanel3.md b/content/page/home/brandPanel3/brandPanel3.md index 64625c031..f4162bd76 100644 --- a/content/page/home/brandPanel3/brandPanel3.md +++ b/content/page/home/brandPanel3/brandPanel3.md @@ -7,4 +7,4 @@ btnTxt: Know More image: zero_os.jpg # src/assets/brandPanel/.. --- -Zero-OS is an autonomous open-source operating system that supports the peer-to-peer cloud and the deployment of infinitely scalable digital workloads with unparalleled levels of security and privacy. +Zero-OS is an autonomous open-source operating system that supports the peer-to-peer cloud and the deployment of infinitely scalable digital workloads with unparalleled levels of privacy and efficiency. diff --git a/content/page/home/home.md b/content/page/home/home.md index bbde9d95a..882d14d8c 100644 --- a/content/page/home/home.md +++ b/content/page/home/home.md @@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ header_title: WELCOME TO THE header_title2: THREEFOLD GRID header_image: ./new_home_header.jpg header_altImg: threefold -header_excerpt: The world’s most advanced peer-to-peer and fully decentralized Internet infrastructure, now ready to host the world’s data and workloads. +header_excerpt: The world's most advanced and fully decentralized peer-to-peer cloud infrastructure is now ready to host the world's data and workloads. button: Get Involved link: /grid cta2: home_cta2 diff --git a/content/page/home/partenerships/partner1/index.md b/content/page/home/partenerships/partner1/index.md index 7bd97c5b8..08653d607 100644 --- a/content/page/home/partenerships/partner1/index.md +++ b/content/page/home/partenerships/partner1/index.md @@ -7,4 +7,4 @@ button: Become a Farmer link: https://threefold.io/farming/farming --- -Help us expand the network even further by becoming a ThreeFold Farmer and earn ThreeFold Tokens (TFT), the currency of decentralized data. +HExpand the network even further by becoming a ThreeFold Farmer and earn a new digital currency as passive income, TFT. diff --git a/content/page/home/partenerships/partner2/index.md b/content/page/home/partenerships/partner2/index.md index d9b5b7563..71161b56a 100644 --- a/content/page/home/partenerships/partner2/index.md +++ b/content/page/home/partenerships/partner2/index.md @@ -7,6 +7,6 @@ button: Deploy link: https://cloud.threefold.io/ --- -In just a few steps, achieve unparalleled security and endless scalability on our network. Our prices will truly shock you! +In just a few steps, achieve unparalleled privacy and endless scalability on our peer-to-peer cloud. Our prices will truly shock you! + -
diff --git a/content/page/mission/mission.md b/content/page/mission/mission.md index 52bb5543e..9139d6fcb 100644 --- a/content/page/mission/mission.md +++ b/content/page/mission/mission.md @@ -1,13 +1,13 @@ --- id: mission metaTitle: ThreeFold | Mission -metaDesc: To transform the future of the Internet by unlocking the limitless potential of emerging technologies and creating borderless opportunities for humanity. +metaDesc: To transform the internet and cloud by unlocking the limitless potential of peer-to-peer infrastructures and creating borderless opportunities for humanity. metaImg: ./about_header.png header_slogan: '' header_title: OUR MISSION header_image: ./about_header.png header_altImg: threefold -header_excerpt: To transform the future of the Internet by unlocking the limitless potential of emerging technologies and creating borderless opportunities for humanity. +header_excerpt: To transform the internet and cloud by unlocking the limitless potential of peer-to-peer infrastructures and creating borderless opportunities for humanity. solution_image: button: The Digital Future link: /blog/post/tf_grid_peoples_internet/ diff --git a/content/page/tft/tft.md b/content/page/tft/tft.md index a09c4ea11..39ca61ae1 100644 --- a/content/page/tft/tft.md +++ b/content/page/tft/tft.md @@ -1,13 +1,13 @@ --- id: tft metaTitle: ThreeFold | TFT -metaDesc: A digital currency that enables a peer-to-peer digital economy. +metaDesc: The ThreeFold Token (TFT) is a digital currency and utility token that enables a peer-to-peer cloud ecosystem. metaImg: ./token_header.png header_slogan: header_title: INSPIRED BY AUTONOMY header_image: ./token_header.png header_altImg: threefold -header_excerpt: A digital currency that enables a peer-to-peer digital economy. +header_excerpt: The ThreeFold Token (TFT) is a digital currency and utility token that enables a peer-to-peer cloud ecosystem. solution_image: button: link: