forked from emre/www_projectmycelium_com
refactor: improve punctuation and grammar consistency across components
- Replaced em dashes with commas for better readability in descriptions - Standardized punctuation in aria-labels (changed "—" to ",") - Removed unnecessary em dashes in favor of commas or removed punctuation - Fixed inconsistent spacing around punctuation marks - Improved sentence flow in multiple component descriptions
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@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@ const capabilities = [
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{
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title: "An always-on space you fully control",
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description:
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"A dedicated, always-on environment you fully command — your own sovereign slice of the network that never goes offline.",
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"A dedicated, always-on environment you fully command, your own sovereign slice of the network that never goes offline.",
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icon: (
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<div className="flex items-start justify-start">
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<CpuChipIcon className="h-12 w-12 text-cyan-400" />
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@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@ export function PodsCapabilities() {
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</H3>
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<P className="mt-6 text-gray-200">
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Access everything from any device — your data follows you, not the other way around.
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Access everything from any device, your data follows you, not the other way around.
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💡 It’s like having your own tiny cloud that belongs only to you.
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</P>
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</div>
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@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@ export function PodsCapabilities() {
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Communicate
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</h3>
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<p className="mt-2 text-gray-200 max-w-2xl">
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Message, call, and share files privately — no tracking or ads.
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Message, call, and share files privately with no tracking or ads.
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</p>
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<div className="mt-8 h-px w-full bg-cyan-500/50" />
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</div>
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@@ -54,7 +54,7 @@ Your own AI, powered by your data without any data leaks.
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Calendar & File Sync
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</h3>
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<p className="mt-2 text-gray-700 max-w-2xl">
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Your schedules, documents, and files — synced across your Pods with no central cloud.
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Your schedules, documents, and files synced across your Pods with no central cloud.
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</p>
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<div className="mt-8 h-px w-full bg-cyan-200" />
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</div>
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@@ -66,7 +66,7 @@ Your own AI, powered by your data without any data leaks.
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Secure Team Spaces
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</h3>
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<p className="mt-2 text-gray-700 max-w-2xl">
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Create shared Pods for teams, communities, or groups — fully encrypted, fully sovereign.
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Create shared Pods for teams, communities, or groups. Fully encrypted, fully sovereign.
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</p>
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<div className="mt-8 h-px w-full bg-cyan-200" />
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</div>
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@@ -79,7 +79,7 @@ Your own AI, powered by your data without any data leaks.
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<span className="ml-2 text-xs text-gray-400">🕒</span>
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</h3>
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<p className="mt-2 text-gray-700 max-w-2xl">
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Host your personal AI agent inside your Pod — private, local-first, and fully under your control.
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Host your personal AI agent inside your Pod. Private, local-first, and fully under your control.
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</p>
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</div>
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@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ const useCases = [
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"Communicate directly Pod-to-Pod with no centralized routing.",
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bullets: [
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"End-to-end encrypted messaging and voice calling.",
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"No intermediaries — connections flow directly between Pods.",
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"No intermediaries, connections flow directly between Pods.",
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"Zero metadata profiling, tracking, or data resale.",
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],
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},
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@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@ const useCases = [
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bullets: [
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"Files remain private with no platform-level scanning or analysis.",
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"Share documents and media directly with trusted contacts.",
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"Full ownership of your content — no cloud vendor dependencies.",
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"Full ownership of your content, with no cloud vendor dependencies.",
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],
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},
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{
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@@ -57,11 +57,11 @@ const useCases = [
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{
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title: "Access From Any Device",
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description:
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"Your Pod travels with you — always accessible, always yours.",
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"Your Pod travels with you. Always accessible, always yours.",
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bullets: [
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"Use your Pod from phones, laptops, tablets, or shared machines.",
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"Your identity, apps, and files follow you securely.",
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"No syncing or duplicated copies — direct access to your environment.",
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"No syncing or duplicated copies, direct access to your environment.",
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],
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},
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];
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@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ export function PodsHow() {
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</li>
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<li className="flex items-start gap-3">
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<span className="mt-1 inline-block size-2 rounded-full bg-cyan-400" />
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<span>When you host a call, it runs on your Pod — no third-party data centers.</span>
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<span>When you host a call, it runs on your Pod. No third-party data centers involved.</span>
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</li>
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<li className="flex items-start gap-3">
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<span className="mt-1 inline-block size-2 rounded-full bg-cyan-400" />
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@@ -47,7 +47,7 @@ export function PodsHow() {
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</ul>
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<P className="max-w-3xl text-gray-400 mt-4">
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No one else can read it, rent it, or switch it off.
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You don’t log in to the internet — you are part of it.
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You don’t log in to the internet, you are part of it.
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</P>
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</div>
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</div>
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@@ -31,7 +31,7 @@ const podCards = [
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id: "control",
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title: "An always-on space you fully control",
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description:
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"A dedicated, always-on environment you fully command — your own sovereign slice of the network that never goes offline.",
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"A dedicated, always-on environment you fully command. Your own sovereign slice of the network that never goes offline.",
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icon: ShieldCheckIcon,
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},
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{
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